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Name : norma (작성일 : 23-12-13 / Hit : 22)

(x)5 days, I will comeback dec. 18

(o) I will stay in Japan for 5 days I will return on December 18.

(x) I check the weather in Japan the temperature same in Korea.its is not raining the temperature is higher that 15 Nagoya is 2 or 3 the gap is big.

(o) I checked Nagoya's temperature and its almost the same with Korea's temperature

(x)I have one list of preparing for.

(o) I have a list of preparations.

(x) when i arrive in airport in japan the organizer will come me.

(o)When I arrive at the airport in Japan the organizer will fetch me.

(x) I visited many countries the ASIA zone.Indonesia thailand , India

(o) I have visited many Asian countries like Thailand, Indonesia and India and so on.