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Name : norma (작성일 : 23-12-15 / Hit : 23)

(x)from mon to fri i go to work my tention is always tight after friday in friday night my tension is down.

(o) On the weekdays my tension is so high, but when weekend comes Its getting low.

(x)im in middle school libray in winter vacation all the same because students go to library in vacation .

(o) I go to the library even on winter vacation because students go to the library even on vacation.

(x)my library no music. in winter its a secret i watch drama i prefer criminal drama .

(o) Theres no music in the library but in winter vacation since sometimes there are no students so i secretly watch dramas.

(x)i think there are many neighborhood criminals. our kids are so young

(o) There are many criminal these days and its dangerous for young kids.

(x)its so dangerous when I was young if theres no one to my house i go to neighborhoods home and tell them my mom.

(o) When I was young when I come back home and my mom was not there, I go to our neighbor's house and informed them that i am alone.

(x)in february Im going to Vietnam. Its my first time. their price is relatively cheap there

(o) On February I will travel in Vietnam with my friend, we chose Vietnam because it's relatively cheap and safe there.