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Name : norma (작성일 : 23-12-27 / Hit : 24)

(x) one week ago I ordered the salted cabbages then I bought the other ingredient

I made early morning the rice boil poljuk

(o) One week ago I ordered the salted cabbages then I just bought the other ingredients. Early morning I cooked rice porridge and mixed the other ingredients on it.

(x) I mentioned my mothers birthday onChristmas day. I gave celebrate .my brother visited my house we enjoyed the time . My brother wanted to go eat out but i didnt agree to eat for the dinner because the Christmas day is noisy outside and many people its is convenient to eat at house

(o) I have mentioned that Christmas day is my mother's birthday and I throw her a simple party or celebration at home. My brother wanted us to have dinner outside for my mom's birthday but I disagreed because it was more convenient if we just stayed at my house. After all, restaurants are crowded and noisy on Christmas day.

(x)I though this birthday for my mother . I think next year I, worried about because my mother is old. SHe's 94 years old I dont know until when

(o) I thought a lot about my mom's birthday because my mother is old she's now 94 and I don't know when we can still celebrate her birthday.